Made a fragmovie, hope I can get some feedback.

[DetectiveBrit]

Hi all, just wanted to drop a fragmovie here and see how it goes, if you have any criticism please tell me as I am new to Sony Vegas.

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J2INcC0e8qA&t=0s

[SkyCloud]

@DetectiveBrit

- No gun sounds or in game sound.

- Music is too calm, you need little bit action and pump.

-No correlation between kill; just random frags thrown into the sequence.

I not a recognized editor but these are the minuses i see, you can also check mine Montage and criticize it

 

Edited November 30, 2018 by SkyCloud

[GhostZ69]

I agree with Skycloud.  Your music is too slow.  The in game sounds missing just leaves you wondering why you dove at this point or spun at that point.  There is not much leading you from one kill to the next.  

Not bad, but some things you can work on!

[Did117]

Aha! Mouse crosshair!

[DetectiveBrit]

1 hour ago, SkyCloud said:

@DetectiveBrit

- No gun sounds or in game sound.

- Music is too calm, you need little bit action and pump.

-No correlation between kill; just random frags thrown into the sequence.

I not a recognized editor but these are the minuses i see, you can also check mine Montage and criticize it

 

 

 

Thank you very much, I had to deal with the Nvidia Highlights, I plan on getting Shadowplay so I can get the parts I want to clip with, and to make more sense, I appreciate the feedback and thank you for it.

[Tr4wnet]

Fragmovie lmao

[Scaramanga-fr]

A fragmovie is supposed to value some skilled actions (like multikills, braining, or even very diffIcult/lucky shots). Not just few shity kills of lonely targets...

Edited December 1, 2018 by Scaramanga-fr

[DetectiveBrit]

10 hours ago, Scaramanga-fr said:

A fragmovie is supposed to value some skilled actions (like multikills, braining, or even very diffIcult/lucky shots). Not just few shity kills of lonely targets...

That wasn't very nice.

[Dashman12092]

Try recording in OBS for gameplay and look into some transitions between kills instead of using jump-cuts. Jump-cuts can be used stylistically to punctuate a calm scene and then just smash into gunfire  meanwhile in the background you have music building up the breaking point. 

Keep at it!

[Aussieeeee]

If you want to make good videos,

You need:
- Dialogue,
- Story
- Action

Nobody wants to see Fragvideos, people want to see good Raid kills.
I would personally run an entire raid video creating clips going from point a-b-c-d-e-f etc etc
You can cut between them, telling a bit of a story with maybe some coms from team mates mixed in

Finally putting your kills in a sequenced order.

If you are just clipping all of your kills from 10 raids and slapping them together you will be lucky to get over 50 views.

 

[DetectiveBrit]

Yeah, I've started to use shadowplay to record so context and input is added my microphone was too loud in the clips so I removed the sound entirely, but I appreciate the good feedback thanks man.